MAGIC BOX: MOVIE SCRIPT

 In that story there are three characters - Deny ,Ammy,and Sandy - go for traveling - found a box there - they want to do something with box - suddenly they found something different from the box - after some time they found themselves in other world - they travel on that world - while traveling they found themselves in some troubles - suddenly Sandy fall down from the bed .

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  1. Well crafted but focus on punctuation marks

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  2. The story seems good. Can you expand it a little? It is too short. Focus on punctuation. The biggest mistake is OUTLINE missing.

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